Cold Steel !! ( A POEM )
Daggers naked ... swords drawn
..I stood.. she stood..
this peircing silence ..
hurting as much as we cud
we squared off.. in this waterloo
a win with a loss ..
love to a toss
and we in exile .. coz we're done and through..
so cold .. so away ..
phone's dead.. no calls today
I spoke till i 'd choke
No .. u wont emote ..
coz u dont feel,
my heaven.. but steel
is what you feel ..
coz suddenly ..
this distance grew..
and i become..
I'm so impertinent to you
lov CP
Saturday, May 26, 2007
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bleeding and wounded in this exile,
I dream of colours we wove
Across the bridge of love.
Would you not see, beyond my silence
That 'you' is all that i care for,
Would you not feel?
My heart of aching pain.
Beyond your wall of impertinence?
cheers :)
now thats why i dont allow anonymous people comment on my blog.. !
Cheers :)
naah.. thats ok..
in continuum with my poem's situation.. u have done well to question the 'impertinence " showed .
AS i see it ..the moment the impertinence begins to take deep root.. is it worth any more questioning. :) ?
So anonymous .. intoduce urself :)
Hey !!
Anonymous number two
I think i know you!! ..
someone nice and cute too..
maybe someone i nevermet .
or maybe someone drew !
:P
cheers
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